17 comments«1234»robsterthefoxReport 2012-12-03 00:56:53Thanks everyone for your support and I am currently working on the second part of the story and it is looking to be pretty good. XXX I’m not saying give up, but you really need a lot of work if your going to produce quality literature.anonymous readerReport 2012-12-02 20:05:20Mistakes yes ! Not perfect but a very good read ! 17 comments«1234»robsterthefoxReport 2012-12-03 00:56:53Thanks everyone for your support and I am currently working on the second part of the story and it is looking to be pretty good. You definitely need an editor as well because your punctuation is truly in need of work!! I admit I didn’t make it even a third of the way through this story.
