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It will smooth out your style and make the story more “comfortable” to read. As I said before – good, creative story. Free porn grammar was atrocious. Thanks.«1» This needs a lot of work before it is readable.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-29 01:05:57Hmmm… Please follow up with another story. Thanks for committing your time and effort to the art of writing and keep writing!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:38:55Yeah, maybe actually finish primary school before attempting to write.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:18:57Very good story! Ignore jerk comments. Please follow up with another story. You left some great possibilities open for a second chapter. Words were very strange, like using “defiant” instead of “definite” over and over implying it’s not merely a spelling error but some confusion on your part.