please if you see something or something reads off to you please for the love of the goddess tell me that way i can fix it you guys are my test audience i plan on trying to get at least Celestial and Arma Published (hoping and praying for Tor) i already have great opinions of some of my reads (i.e Larynx guy) and know that some idiots do read my stuff (i.e. i was pleasantly surprised to read some of the comments. XXX if you have questions about other questions of a story let me know on here and i will post answers to any questions … and i am sorry but if i pull something down and re edit it i promise it will become better and most of the
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Bunny Colby
