Other than that, not bad.Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-26 09:36:15Needs some structure work (spelling, grammar, etc) but decent story. I don’t wanna vote cause I don’t think you deserve a negative or positive vote.Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-27 19:46:48Mr. Pornhub He loved to brag to me about the fact that he was with my sister and that he’d had his hand on her tits or some silly shit. You described more about the black man than anyone else! You described more about the black man than anyone else! Who ARE these people? Other than that, not bad.Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-26 09:36:15Needs some structure work (spelling, grammar, etc) but decent story. She sucked my dick many times and I eventually claimed her virginity. Wasn’t unreadable or anything, but dialogue was a bit rough towards the beginning.
