Well done, make it longer. Porn Give more detail..More of his emotions about it. Give more detail..More of his emotions about it. You can work into the omniscient and show the scene, then revert to his angle. 1/10READERReport 2005-10-09 15:58:48Miker’s an ass, don’t listen to that little fuck. Keep it up!«1» Give more detail..More of his emotions about it. 1/10READERReport 2005-10-09 15:58:48Miker’s an ass, don’t listen to that little fuck. Keep it up!«1» Or you can switch into the body of one ofn the girls.READERReport 2005-10-09 02:20:22Fuck you Miker! You can work into the omniscient and show the scene, then revert to his angle. You also don’t have to describe merely what he can see.
