The way you explain avatar and journey of seeking was good. When the characters talk I want them to sound like real people, not William Shatner. XXX I haven’t played in a while and want to find a group again. That’s why I’m taking my time between chapters right now, I want the story to unfold properly and with quality that a rush job would ruin. Also the story is being told from the first person so some of the issues are the characters, this is why I never go into the thoughts of other characters. Very little spelling, words and grammar errors found. No not just good but excellent.
Actors:
Logan Salamanca / Sara Blonde
