6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-01 22:06:45the plot is nice but I think u r missing details ! its a good story I liked it.Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-01 13:36:15waaaaaaaaay toooooooooooo shoooooooorrrrrrrttttt!!!!!!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-31 22:21:19build up to it a little bit more…it seemed like one minute you had neighbors and next you were giving a blowjob? Xxx video What I did read was okay but I had to stop because it was just too hard to ignore all the little stuff. What I did read was okay but I had to stop because it was just too hard to ignore all the little stuff. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-01 22:06:45the plot is nice but I think u r missing details ! And as everyone else has told you, you need to use paragraphs too.
