Just because you’re not an illiterate dumbass doesn’t mean that you can write a story. Pornhub Try harder.«1234» blunt. And just way too… Very little description. I can’t wait to read part 2.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-23 22:20:52…It wasn’t good, at all. Just because you’re not an illiterate dumbass doesn’t mean that you can write a story. And just way too… It would be better to find someone else to proofread it so that you don’t keep making the same mkstake. Made me cum hard and I’d rate it a 8/10.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-24 06:59:40kyle you need n to suck you dryanonymous readerReport 2011-03-06 08:59:43Not too bad of a story, but get a proofreader who does well in English, because your spelling, grammar, punctuation, possessives, and tenses have many errors, which make this story difficult to read.Anonymous
