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horny-I think maintaining a rotation through the characters is a good idea and ID’ing each POV change would probabily been the biggest improvement. Porn video Don’t know about continuing. great POV x’s 4. Cija-The story evolved like a shack turning into a mansion, my biggest regret was not making the POV changes read clearly. Don’t much want the the stroker’s votes. 22 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2011-03-20 08:22:23RpB/M: WTF! I’ll try to write the sex if I can’t avoid it. Don’t much want the the stroker’s votes. CijaonehandedtypistReport 2011-03-07 16:35:46Fuck the complainers ssalo. lol
horny-I think maintaining a rotation through the characters is a good idea and ID’ing each POV change would probabily been the biggest improvement. OHT- Thanks for the support, it’s always appreciated but I thought even the least tactful had something to say worth
