8/10READERReport 2006-07-22 01:30:23What find of fucking bullshit is this ?READERReport 2006-07-16 23:04:20Her language was just fine, u must not have very much exp.or you’d know how women talk when they’re getting laid. Sex video Thanks heaps! 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-14 00:09:16I really liked your story!!! 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-14 00:09:16I really liked your story!!! Nah, rework the language a little and try again.«1» you probably need a little more experience both sexually and as a writer before you try to write a story in a female voice. The language was not very believable. writer, u gotta 10, for talk, the story, and the sex. you probably need a little more experience both sexually and as a writer before you try to write a story in a female voice.
