Whether you are or are not, you clearly need editorial help. Xxx video Whether you are or are not, you clearly need editorial help. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-05-12 02:02:45Are you a native speaker of English? ICTYBTIHTKYanonymous readerReport 2011-06-18 12:29:27good story want moreanonymous readerReport 2011-06-11 09:52:43I gave the story a positive rating, but you sure could use a good editor. The story is a good on, though, so keep writing.«1» There are many spelling errors and the dialogue is rather stilted in several places. The story is a good on, though, so keep writing.«1» The story is a good on, though, so keep writing.«1» 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-05-12 02:02:45Are you a native speaker of English?
