8 comments«12»READERReport 2007-06-12 13:02:38Go Marines! XXX It could be a lot better. You’re doing good. It could be a lot better. You need to kill him off and let her find her mother.«12» Keep it up and please continueREADERReport 2007-02-17 06:05:20Let’s face it, and I’m not being mean to the author: This is a very average story. Go Cowboys! 8 comments«12»READERReport 2007-06-12 13:02:38Go Marines! Grammar could use a little work though. It could be a lot better. 6.5/10READERReport 2007-02-17 01:36:06There is such a thing as a spell checker…USE IT!!! One request–please “don’t take the girl.”READERReport 2007-02-17 21:43:25hey i loved it ! Go Cowboys! You’re doing good. Everything sounded good until the Chase character ended up being a sadistic rapist and killer.
