It was a little fast and the sex scene was incomplete. You obviously didn’t take time to proof-read it.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-17 21:30:55tell us your dirty secret at americasdirtysecrets dot us«12» 7 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-04-24 07:00:11More chapters pleaseanonymous readerReport 2013-10-18 21:23:44Slow down and write the whole story. XXX There should have been so much more.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-18 00:55:15this story is faster than you can fap withanonymous readerReport 2013-09-18 00:46:49You really need to work on your writing. This one is full of writing errors as well as leaving the reader wondering why you omitted the whole second page. 7 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-04-24 07:00:11More chapters pleaseanonymous readerReport 2013-10-18 21:23:44Slow down and write the whole story. You seemed to be in a great hurry to dash this off and go do something else. You obviously didn’t take time to proof-read it.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-17
