First of the story felt rushed. You really have to work on your writing. Xxx video If you enjoy writing i say keep going, the more you write the better you’ll get, but please listen to people who give you advice on your writing, the’re only trying to help you. Yes you’re right i don’t submit stories. Cya Later:)
Thel20anonymous readerReport 2013-05-11 18:47:24Writing was quite rushed and the grammar quite terrible. First of the story felt rushed. So i don’t know where you got that from. If you enjoy writing i say keep going, the more you write the better you’ll get, but please listen to people who give you advice on your writing, the’re only trying to help you. All i said was that she should describe things more, to expand some
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