Fuck thisanonymous readerReport 2012-04-20 12:43:23Geez! Didn’t know you could not use quotation marks in the comments. Pornhub And give the guy more “Alone-Time” with the girl.anonymous readerReport 2012-04-20 08:21:12Wow, really slow start! Agree with the thing to drop the background characters unless you plan to bring them into a teenage orgy in someone’s cabin.«12» Agree with the thing to drop the background characters unless you plan to bring them into a teenage orgy in someone’s cabin.«12» almost as hard to read as some of the stories posted here…Sorry, but my suggestions are still valid. …lolanonymous readerReport 2012-04-20 12:41:29Overall, it has some potential. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-21 01:31:51Do you think that you can finish it?anonymous readerReport 2012-08-10 10:18:17All they did was make out? Agree with the thing to drop the background characters unless you plan to bring them
