All in all an OK story, for a 16 yo.READERReport 2005-09-26 04:56:29where in the world did this “writer” learn English? Porn video Best of luck!READERReport 2005-09-26 11:18:28Well, now we have the titmans perspective. All in all an OK story, for a 16 yo.READERReport 2005-09-26 04:56:29where in the world did this “writer” learn English? Where does she buy her tee-shirts, the childrens section? It ruined the story totally. In China? It ruined the story totally. I suggest you return to the basics of storytelling. How in the world could anybodsy say this was a good story???READERReport 2005-09-25 23:01:45Good, hot and fast. Better yet, devote more time to your next story. That said, it’s not a bad story–you could rewrite it by filling it out.
