Basic engllsh rules: If 2 people are in a conversation, start a new paragraph every time the speaker changes. XXX Example:
“Elizabeth, have you been drinking?”
“No, Mr. The scarf was a fantastic touch. Jones.”
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“I don’t believe you.”Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-17 19:45:19i’m a teenage girl who doesn’t usually go for rape stories, but this story drove me wild… ^_-«1» Example:
“Elizabeth, have you been drinking?”
“No, Mr. 4 comments«1»Eron the RelentlessReport 2009-11-22 05:03:08Very hot story,but lacking details.You went too fast towards goal imo.launchdirectorReport 2009-11-19 12:46:20This was short, but white hot.
