The storyline is opressively trite and it’s filled with minucia.Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-24 23:52:18The basic story is good, but you really need to work on your spelling and grammar. Xxx video Women need to stop shaving their pubes. It had a lot of potential but poor grammar and inarticulation made it boring and difficult to read. Try reading some Steven King for pace.Anonymous readerReport 2016-08-04 20:32:44I gave you a negative rating because she had a shaved pussy. 28 comments«12345»wantingnotReport 2019-11-03 23:10:58Th concept is quite good but it is presented poorly. 28 comments«12345»wantingnotReport 2019-11-03 23:10:58Th concept is quite good but it is presented poorly. You keep using Your instead of You’re, cars don’t have breaks unless they’re broken, they have brakes, start each sentence with a capital, use punctuation for goodness sake!
