5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-23 16:04:22I really enjoyed the story, but like above a little more detail would make it great. What a shame to let these sick, depraved, mentally disturbed motherfuckers have it.READERReport 2006-02-18 00:53:14Not bad, but the details were conspicuously missing during the sex. Porn Add more to that part and it’ll be great. crap.READERReport 2006-02-18 19:36:15Fucking fags. What a shame to let these sick, depraved, mentally disturbed motherfuckers have it.READERReport 2006-02-18 00:53:14Not bad, but the details were conspicuously missing during the sex. Thanks, and keep writing!READERReport 2006-04-08 12:10:58it’s funny how you get some readers telling you how your a fag and give you all that negitive feedback. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-23 16:04:22I really enjoyed the story, but like above a little more detail would make it great.
