I welcome criticism and contstructive criticism of my writing as I truly believe it assists me in bettering myself as an author. I would suggest you go read the “Reading Allowed” series by zenmackie if you want to see a real, talented writer at work.Lil-BrandiReport 2009-09-25 15:41:13Thank you Dragon Overlords and the reader listed before, your support is appreciated. Sex video I was contacted via email by a dozen readers yesterday. 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-23 03:02:05i like the story its great and everything but the most exciting part probably was when she gets the roseAnonymous readerReport 2009-10-16 01:12:39Great story Brandi, I love your stories as you do take into consideration all situations at all times. The ratings make that painfully obvious. I would suggest you go read the “Reading Allowed” series by zenmackie if you
