This was difficult to read. Pornhub cut your fucking fingers off that way you are unable to do so even if you’re tempted to do so in the future. But you should let someone else write the final draft for you. It was a cute story. This was just absolute shit, if you consider writing another story take my advice… PLEASE either learn english or wait till you finish middle school before you even attempt writing again. But as a writer, I’d say it wasn’t your bag.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 14:18:26You need to learn the definition of “best” as your name is completely wrong.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 14:16:02I couldn’t get very far with the horindous destruction of the english language that was going on.
