92 comments«12345»sassy_girlReport 2017-11-08 17:03:32i think you should continue but it get kinkier you know add water sports and maybe the family goes away except for josh, Jeremy and Lisa and have them make her their petAnonymous readerReport 2016-03-19 14:00:19Make one about them raping KarenAnonymous readerReport 2014-06-06 02:53:50You need help. That says a lot about you. XXX And to the rude anonymous readers, i dare you to write a better story.«12345» ‘re do the characters and this God be okayAnonymous readerReport 2014-04-15 09:21:27if you could have her being ambushed in an alley and have josh save her, then you could really get some respectanonymous readerReport 2013-06-11 19:30:50Marvelous story. You are an asshole if you don’t continue this, please don’t be one. No emotional bonding of any type. ‘re do the characters and this God be okayAnonymous readerReport 2014-04-15
