The story is not bad, but the grammar errors make it too hard to read and enjoy.””
Seriously? worst grammar in a long time! Porn video worst grammar in a long time! Since he wrote this for us to enjoy FOR FREE I don’t see where you should demand anything! learn to write proper English before you publish crap. IF you don’t like it go find another author to bitch at! To dragoon173: Thank you for your efforts and for posting them here.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-05 12:01:40mistakes? The story is not bad, but the grammar errors make it too hard to read and enjoy.””
Seriously? The story is not bad, but the grammar errors make it too hard to read and enjoy.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-04 02:30:50I like this my dick got super hardanonymous readerReport 2013-11-04 02:30:46I like this my
