65 comments«12345»Bigguy500Report 2019-12-27 15:53:12Good story line. XXX Your writing is incredible . ComAnonymous readerReport 2017-01-22 07:39:26Re reading for the 3rd time over in 2017 and still as great as ever! Please continue your work!«12345» CHYOA . The entire story . You desperately need an editor.Bigguy500Report 2019-12-27 15:53:05Good story line. 65 comments«12345»Bigguy500Report 2019-12-27 15:53:12Good story line. ComAnonymous readerReport 2017-01-22 07:39:26Re reading for the 3rd time over in 2017 and still as great as ever! The entire story . Please continue your work!«12345» So good . ComAnonymous readerReport 2017-01-22 07:39:26Re reading for the 3rd time over in 2017 and still as great as ever! Thank you .Wolf_KnightReport 2018-04-17 03:31:56I am moving my stories to another site to work on them more slowly as well as to allow others the ability to add to them as well.
