I give it an 8/10«12» Great story. Xxx video That’s pretty good grammar for what’s here. That’s pretty good grammar for what’s here. That’s pretty good grammar for what’s here. Great story. 6 comments«12»READERReport 2006-03-25 22:39:43bunghole? 6 comments«12»READERReport 2006-03-25 22:39:43bunghole? That’s pretty good grammar for what’s here. 6 comments«12»READERReport 2006-03-25 22:39:43bunghole? That’s pretty good grammar for what’s here. Great story. All the same, after fighting through this grammatical jungle, I still enjoyed it. Great story. 9/10READERReport 2006-03-24 06:04:23This was a wonderful story, but it could have been twice as good if the “author” only learned a little about proper punctuation, spelling, use of proper grammar, etc. Great story. I give it an 8/10«12» 6 comments«12»READERReport 2006-03-25 22:39:43bunghole? 9/10READERReport 2006-03-24 06:04:23This was a wonderful story, but it could have been twice as good if the “author” only learned a




















