Big Titted Ginger Fucks The Mafia Don And Makes Him Beg For More

OHT- Thanks for the support, it’s always appreciated but I thought even the least tactful had something to say worth thinking about. XXX Top marks from me! I don’t think it took away from the story. I think I tried for too much when I tried to make the seperate thoughts read like dialogue in the first part. Great story. lol
horny-I think maintaining a rotation through the characters is a good idea and ID’ing each POV change would probabily been the biggest improvement. The choppiness was partly intentional and partly the best I could do. The choppiness was partly intentional and partly the best I could do. Add gratuitus sex to get more votes?cijababeReport 2011-03-08 03:16:25I loved it!