All and all ill give it a 4/5. Bring on part 2!Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-05 10:43:53You HAVE to make a chapter 2. Sex video I hope u write a 2nd one.Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-27 10:58:18The switching between first and third person was a little confusing at first, but wasnt that bad. Nice work :DDiViNaTiOnReport 2009-11-08 02:19:52Only thing I had the slightest problem with was you switched from thrid to first. All and all ill give it a 4/5. for me?(:Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-01 11:36:23This story was GREAT. I cant wait to read part two! But the twist, DAMN!!«12» I hope u write a 2nd one.Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-27 10:58:18The switching between first and third person was a little confusing at first, but wasnt that bad. for me?(:Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-01 11:36:23This story was GREAT.
