I only comment about spelling and grammer, if it brings the story down. Xxx video There are soooo many miss-spelled words that it takes twice or three times as long to read it as it should. Keep trying, and use the spell checker and re-read your story to fix difficult spots.«1» Fucking Hopeless !!anonymous readerReport 2012-11-16 16:17:43Your Story seems to bounce around a lot. There are soooo many miss-spelled words that it takes twice or three times as long to read it as it should. There are soooo many miss-spelled words that it takes twice or three times as long to read it as it should.
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