Unfortunately, some people labelled your story negatively after seeing a few glaring violations and seem to ignore your skill as a storyteller. Xxx video … The “of” is completely unnecessary. It shows a plot and good story-telling skill. I liked yyour story. Mind you, most of your readers have some college education or at least a few years of being struck across their hands by an English & Grammer teacher- so they will be the first to point out your violating basic rules… Mind you, most of your readers have some college education or at least a few years of being struck across their hands by an English & Grammer teacher- so they will be the first to point out your violating basic rules…




















