And just way too… XXX Just because you’re not an illiterate dumbass doesn’t mean that you can write a story. 16 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2015-05-21 04:05:06The story is good, although you need to proof read your work. I can’t wait to read part 2.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-23 22:20:52…It wasn’t good, at all. There was no build up. And just way too… I can’t wait to read part 2.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-23 22:20:52…It wasn’t good, at all. blunt. blunt. There was no build up. It would be better to find someone else to proofread it so that you don’t keep making the same mkstake. blunt. 16 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2015-05-21 04:05:06The story is good, although you need to proof read your work.
